I can tell you you did a wonderful job on her looking smug on her beatiful face. Her arm indicating you to follow is a great touch, inviting anyone who would dare spend a night with her, or at least, that is how I am taking it, heh.
I cannot gicve you critique body wise because it would have to be her nude version. I can tell you though her armor does fit well with her body andd it does a nice way to amplify her look of her hips. Love the gauntlets/hoof wear on her feet. Great job, would like to see more.